过去分词 ( 过去分词其实有点象 形容词 ) 定语 Students from disadvantaged families are not confident. 形容词 (adjective) ( 形容词大部分情况下和现在分词 过去分词差不多, 充当定语 表语 宾补还有状语 ) 形容词如果前面加上

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1 词性 可以充 当的成 分 例句 名词 (noun) 主语 Happiness is important to us 宾语同位语定语表语宾补 We pursue happiness in our lives. We pursue many things, such as happiness, in our lives. Distance education is beneficial to those who have a heavy workload. My sister is a nurse. Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence. 动词 (verb) 不及物动词 vi 谓语 She travels around Asia every year. 及物动词 vt 谓语 She found a job last year. 动名词 gerund 和不定式 ( 这些词其实和名词差不多, 充当类似的成分 ) 现在分词 ( 现在分词其实有点象形容词 ) 主语宾语表语定语状语表语 Travelling is a good way to rest. To travel overseas is important. ( 但是这个时候, 一般 是会用形式主语 ) She enjoys travelling very much. I want to travel overseas. Her hobby is travelling around Asia. The purpose of doing this job is to make money. Many Chinese students choose to study in Englishspeaking countries. Travelling around Asia, she is familiar with many countries cultures. The effect is devastating.

2 过去分词 ( 过去分词其实有点象 形容词 ) 定语 Students from disadvantaged families are not confident. 形容词 (adjective) ( 形容词大部分情况下和现在分词 过去分词差不多, 充当定语 表语 宾补还有状语 ) 形容词如果前面加上 THE, 这样又变成类似于名词的东西 表语补语状语定语表语宾补状语主语宾语 I'm interested in this language. I had my hair cut last week. Caught in a heavy rain, he was all wet. The yellow sweater is mine. Mine sweater is yellow I want to color the sweater yellow. I arrived home, hungry and cold. The new will replace the old. We should respect the old and love the young. 副词 (adverb) 状语 He was driving rather fast. 介词的宾 语 表语 I have got a gift from abroad. We are behind in our plan. 代词 (pronoun) 人称代词 主语 宾语表语介词的宾语 I like her, and I enjoy living with her. The one who broken the glass is her. Don t forget to reply to me by .

3 形容词性物主代词定语 Your book is on the table. 名词性物主代词主语 Mine is on the shelf. 宾语 of 连接的定语表语 I will take mine along with me today. The book with a black cover is another one of mine. The book in the bag is hers 指示代词主语 It/this/that is a lovely story. 介词 (preposition) 虚词不能单独成为句子成分, 一般以介宾短语的形式出现 宾语表语定语表语定语状语补语 There is a problem about the computer, I will settle it. Who is that speaking These/those cloths are old fashioned. The story is about his own life. He told us the reason for being late. There is a new bridge across the river. We must bear the knowledge in mind. 冠词的使用 如果名词是 可数名词 选择 1: 复数可数名词的复数如果前面加定冠词 THE, 往往是特指选择 2: 不定冠词选择 3: 定冠词 the( 很多时候是特指 ) Students have to study many subjects today. The subjects he studied are related to law. ( 特指他所学的课程 ) English is an important subject. He brings a book wherever he goes. ( 他去哪里都带着书, 可能是任何一本书 ) He brings the book wherever he goes. ( 是一本特定的

4 书 ) 选择 4: 零冠词 ( 可能是固 定的搭配 ) Every student has the opportunity to go to college. 如果名词是 不可数名词 选择 1: 零冠词 Water is vital to life. ( 世界上的水都是重要的 ) 选择 2: 定冠词 the( 特 指 ) The water in this lake is now polluted. ( 特指这个湖的 水 ) 主动 被动 主 + 不及物动词 This problem exists. 无 主 + 系动词 + 表语 This is a problem. 无 主 + 及物动词 + 宾语 I have finished this job. This job has been finished. 主 + 及物动词 + 间接宾语 + 直接宾语 This company has given me a good opportunity. I have been given a good opportunity. 主 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语 His success has encouraged me to further my study. I have been encouraged to further my study. 使用方法 : 自己先翻译一下, 对照准确的句子记住句子中出现的词伙, 熟悉其用法和语境熟悉基本的句型 ( 里面不少句子是十大基本句子 ), 确保自己在不同语境下可以迅速选择和写出准确的单句注意观察错误的句子, 因为这些句子一般都是常见错误, 可以提高你对语法错误的敏感最后, 如果有兴趣, 可以通过复杂句的中文口头翻译一下, 不仅熟悉这句话, 也可以提高口语表达的能力 NB: 基础差的同学经常会死背, 那样是不会提高的 最好通过翻译提高语法 ( 譬如说分 析句子的成分, 熟悉单词的词性 ) 翻译 1: 经常做运动会提高人的自信

5 错误的句子 :Exercise regularly can rise one's confidence. 错误 1 Exercise 如果这里是动词, 应该用动名词, 如果是名词, 不能用副词修饰 错误 2 rise 不及物动词 正确的句子 :Regular exercise can increase one's self-confidence. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (confidence) 可以用定语从句扩充 : Participating in sports frequently can boost people's confidence, which is important not only to the youth but also to the elderly. 注 : 不可以说 regular doing exercise, 因为形容词 regular 不可以修饰 doing 中文翻译 : 经常参加体育活动能够提高人们的自信心, 这不但对年轻人而且对老人很重要 翻译 2: 依赖计算器会影响人的心算能力 (mental arithmetic) 错误的句子 :Rely heavily on calculators will have negative impact on human beings` mental arithmetic. 错误 1 rely 是动词, 不能充当主语 错误 2 impact 可数名词, 要有冠词 错误 3 human beings 多余, 不是人类莫非是动物么? 正确的句子 : Relying heavily on calculators will have a negative impact on mental arithmetic. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (impact) 也可以用现在分词扩充 : The excessive reliance on calculators is likely to have an adverse impact on children's mental arithmetic and pose a threat to their intellectual development.

6 中文翻译 : 过度依赖计算器可能会对人们的心算能力有负面影响, 对孩子的智力发展有威胁 翻译 3: 很多女孩都不愿意在男人居多的行业里 (male-dominated world) 找工作 错误的句子 :A number of girks are not willing to hunting jobs in the male-dominated world 错误 1 willing to do something 固定搭配 错误 2 a number of 在这里感觉是在某个地方, 有一些女孩不愿意做什么 错误 3 定冠词不恰当, 因为世界上男人居多的行业有很多, 不可能特指 正确的句子 :Many girls are not willing to seek employment in a male-dominated world. 句 子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 (willing) 也可以用状语从句扩充 : Numerous women are unwilling to find employment in a male-dominated world because they can face barriers to top-level promotion. 中文翻译 : 很多女孩不愿意在男人为大多数的行业找工作, 因为她们会面临在高职位升迁中的阻碍 翻译 4: 环境问题已经成为公众关心的焦点 错误的句子 :environmental problem has been the focus of public concern. 错误 1 problem 可数名词, 要加冠词或者复数错误 2 be 是表示 是 的意思, 强调状态, 要用 become, 强调变化正确的句子 :The environmental problem has become the focus of public concern. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 (become)+ 表语 (the focus)

7 拓展的句子 :The environmental problems has become the focus of public concern, for example, greenhouse emissions. That is why the government limits people to use private cars in urban areas. 错误 1: 同位语 greenhouse emissions 离所修饰名词太远 错误 2: 主谓不一致 修改 :Environmental problems such as greenhouse gas emissions have become the focus of public concern and some regulations can be enforced to tackle these problems. 中文翻译 : 环境问题比如温室气体的发放已经成为公共关注的焦点, 因此一些规则应该被实施来处理这些问题 翻译 5: 家长和老师应该努力去减少小孩看电视的时间 错误的句子 :parents and teachers should do their efforts to curb the time of watching TV on children. 错误 1 make an effort to 固定表达错误 2 curb 一般是抑制某种行为, 而不是接 time. 错误 3 watching TV on children 也不通 正确的句子 :parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children s screen time. 句子结构 : 主语 (parents and teachers)+ 及物动词 (make)+ 宾语 (effort) 拓展的句子 :Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encourage them to do more out-door activities. 错误 :protecting 和 encourage 不对称正确的句子 :Parents and teachers should make an effort to limit children's screen time, thereby protecting children's eyesight and encouraging them to do more outdoor activities. 注 : 这句话的分词最好不要改成定语从句, 因为前面不知道是修饰 screen time 还是 limit screen time 中文翻译 : 家长和老师应该努力去减少孩子看电视的时间, 这样会保护孩子的视力, 鼓励他们做户外运动

8 翻译 6: 艺术不属于学校的主科 错误的句子 :Arts is not regarded as a core curriculum at school. 错误 1 主谓不一致 错误 2 curriculum 是所有课程的总称 正确的句子 : The arts are not among core subject areas at school. 句子结构 : 主语 (The arts)+ 系动词 (are)+ 表语 ( 介词 among+ 宾语充当表语 ) 拓展的句子 :The arts are not among core subject areas at school. However, we should learn them at school. Because they could add spice of our life. 错误 1:because 是从属连词, 要连接两个句子 错误 2:add spice to life 才是固定搭配 错误 3: them 有点指代不清楚. 正确的句子 :The arts are not among core subject areas at school but deserve a place in the curriculum, for these subjects add spice to life. 中文翻译 : 虽然艺术不属于学校的主要课程, 但是它们在课程大纲里值得拥有一席之地, 因为这些科目能够给生活添色彩 翻译 7 农村的失业问题在某种程度上可以通过城乡转移 (rural-to-urban shift) 解决 错误的句子 :Unemployment in rural areas can be address by rural-to-urban shift. 错误 1 被动语态没有过去分词错误 2 shift 是可数名词, 最好要有冠词正确的句子 :Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift. 句子结构 :( 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 ) 的被动语态

9 拓展的句子 :Unemployment in rural areas can be addressed partially by the rural-to-urban shift, because rural areas are lack of industry and services, which causes high unemployment rate. 错误 1:because 后面的内容只是解释了为什么乡村的失业率很高, 但是没有解释为什么 城乡转移可以解决这个问题 错误 2:rate 可数名词 错误 3: 一般不要 lack of 充当表语 正确的句子 :The lack of infrastructure and government funding in rural areas is the main cause of unemployment, which can be addressed partially by the rural-to 中文翻译 : 农村失业问题的主要原因是缺少基础建设和政府资助, 这个问题在某种程度可以通过城乡转移解决 hift. 翻译 8 经济的下滑 (economic slowdown) 导致失业率的上升 错误的句子 :Economic slowdown made the climbing unemployment rate. 错误 1 不要用过去时 错误 2 用不定冠词好一点, 因为正在上升的失业率一般不可能是唯一的 正确的句子 :Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 拓展的句子 : Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, in view of the fact that employers are reluctant to recruit new employees so as to cut overhead. 错误 : 可能产生歧义, recruit new employees 是雇佣, reluctant to recruit new employees 是不愿意雇用 到底是哪个事情导致 cut overhead? 正确的句子 :Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate because employers intend to cut overheads and refuse to recruit new employees. 中文翻译 : 经济下滑已经导致失业率上升, 因为雇主打算裁员而且拒绝雇用新员工 另外一个豆瓣的学生写的句子也不错, 我发出来 :

10 Economic slowdown has led to a climbing unemployment rate, as people balk at starting up new businesses and a number of giant companies downsize their workforce. 中文翻译 : 经济下滑已经导致失业率上升, 因为人们对开展新失业犹豫不决, 而且很多大 公司裁员 翻译 9 因为不够明朗的经济前景 (economic outlook), 很多公司不可能招聘新的职员 错误的句子 : Because of unclear/ambiguous economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employments. 错误 1 ambiguous 一般不修饰 OUTLOOK 错误 2 应该是 employees 正确的句子 : Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 Because of 是介词词组引导原因状语 拓展的句子 :Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employers, so a considerable number of graduates will face the problem of unemployment. 错误 : because of 和 so 一般避免连用 错误 2: employees 雇员 正确的句子 :Because of the uncertainty about the economic outlook, many companies are unlikely to recruit new employees and a considerable number of graduates fail to find employment. 中文翻译 : 因为经济前景的不确定, 很多公司不可能招聘新人, 因此大量的毕业生找不到 工作 翻译 10 高层建筑有时候被认为是城市的 eyesore

11 错误的句子 (4.5 分 ):Occasionally,high-rise buildings are tend to be regarded as the eyesore of a city. 错误 1 Occasionally 表示的意思是 偶尔地, 很少地 错误 2 be + do 永远是错的正确的句子 :High-rise buildings are sometimes regarded as eyesores of the city. 注 : 这句话里如果说 the eyesore 就是特指, 意思就是城市只有一处难看的地方, 事实上未必如此 句子结构 : somebody regards something as something 是 主语 + 足语 的结构 + 宾语 + 宾语补 而这句话是这个结构的被动语态 翻译 11: 经济的发展需要年轻的劳动者 错误的句子 :The economic development requires a great number of fresh working forces 错误 1 working force 没有这个表达 正确的句子 :A country's economic development relies on a supply of young workers 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 也可以用分句扩充, the problem is that 是表语从句 A country's economic development relies on a supply of young workers, but the problem is that the aging society has an adverse impact on the labour force. 中文翻译 : 一个国家的经济发展依靠一定量的年轻劳动力, 但是问题是老龄化的社会对劳 动力有负面影响 翻译 12: 工作很多的人没有时间去休息, 去充电 (recharge batteries) 错误的句子 :People do with heavy workload cannot have adequate times to rest and recharge batteries

12 错误 1 do 不知道功能是干嘛的 错误 2 time 不可数错误 5 cannot 是表示不可能, 这里应该是 do not 正确的句子 :People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest and recharge batteries. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语, to rest and recharge batteries 不定式充当 的后置定语 也可以用定语从句扩充 People with a heavy workload do not have adequate time to rest and recharge batteries, which can be harmful to their fitness. 中文翻译 : 工作很多的人没有足够的时间去休息和充电, 这样对他们的健康有害 翻译 13 : 送贵重的礼物 (lavish gifts) 是中国的习惯 错误的句子 :It is a custom for Chinese to send lavish gifts to others. 错误 custom 是习惯或者传统的意思, 最好用动名词, 而不是 to send.. 这个不定式 正确的句子 :It is customary for Chinese people to exchange lavish gifts. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 ;it 是形式主语, to exchange lavish gifts 不定式是真正 的主语 其他选择 :Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 也可以用并列句 + 状语从句来扩充 Exchanging lavish gifts is a tradition in China and many people feel they lose face when giving or receiving inexpensive gifts. 中文翻译 : 送贵重礼物是一种中国传统, 当收到或者送便宜礼物的时候许多人觉得没面子

13 翻译 14 : 在中国, 很多学生晚上都要自习 错误的句子 :Large number of students in China have to study at night. 错误 1 a large number of 固定搭配 正确的句子 :A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 也可以用状语从句来扩充 A large number of students in China have to do self-study at night, so extra curricular activities have to give way to studies. 中文翻译 : 在中国, 许多学生都要在晚上自学, 所以课外活动不得不给学习让路 翻译 15 : 空运产生很多的温室气体错误的句子 :Air freight is likely to exhaust a large number of greenhouse gases. 错误 1 exhaust 这个词动词的时候, 没有排放的意思 ( 这个是很常见的错误!) 错误 2 a large number of 很少形容 gases, goods 这种强调数量的东西 正确的句子 :Air freight is likely to create enormous greenhouse gases. 注 : 这句话也可以使用完成时态 :Air freight has produced enormous greenhouse gases. 完成时在这里最大的问题是把 air freight 变成了一个持续的完整的事物, 而我们都知道空运是有次数的分别 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语也可以用比较状语从句扩充 Air freight is likely to create more greenhouse gases than other modes of transport. 中文翻译 : 空运可能比其他运输方式产生更多的温室气体 翻译 16 : 未来几十年我们很难保护植物多样性

14 错误的句子 :We will find it difficult for us to protect the biodiversity of vegetation in the coming decades. 错误 1 we... for us 重复 错误 2 vegetaion 略显重复 正确的句子 :We will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 句子结构 : 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 (it, 形式宾语 ) + 宾语补足语 (difficult), 而不定式是真正 的宾语 还可以扩充为状语从句 Unless local authorities reduce the impact of city expansion on vegetation, we will find it difficult to preserve biodiversity in the coming decades. 中文翻译 : 除非当地政府减少城市扩张对植物的影响, 否则在未来几十年里我们会发现保 护物种多样性很困难 翻译 17: heritage sites 因为城市发展而受到威胁 错误的句子 :The development of cities have pose a threat on heritage sites. 错误 1 have pose 动词错误而且主谓不一致 错误 2 pose a threat to 固定搭配 正确的句子 :The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites. 句子的结构 : 主语 (development)+ 及物动词 (pose)+ 宾语 (threat) 还可以用并列句扩充 The development of cities has posed a threat to heritage sites, but the government has no idea whether to protect or demolish these constructions. 中文翻译 : 城市的发展已经威胁到历史遗迹, 但是政府还没有办法是否去保护还是毁坏这 些建筑 翻译 18 孩子很有可能有行为的问题

15 错误的句子 :The children are likely to meet behavior problems. 错误 1 meet problems 搭配不对错误 2 behavioural problems 固定搭配正确的句子 :The children are likely to have behavioural problems. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 (likely) 还可以用定语从句扩充 The children who are exposed to abuse or neglect in the home are likely to problems. behavioural 中文翻译 : 在家遭受虐待或者忽视的孩子可能会有行为问题 翻译 19 人口的扩大是大量垃圾产生的原因 错误的句子 :population expansion constitutes the main reason of enormous garbages. 错误 1 reason for 固定搭配 错误 2 garbage 和 waste 都是不可数名词 正确的句子 :The rapid population expansion is the main reason for the huge accumulation of waste. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 (reason) 还可以用定语从句扩展 Population expansion is the main reason for the huge accumulation of waste, which can take decades to degrade. 中文翻译 : 人口的扩大是大量垃圾产生的原因, 这些垃圾需要几十年才能降解 翻译 20 我们不能够忽视面对面的交流 错误的句子 :It cannot be ignored by people to have some face-to-face communication.

16 错误 1 it 指代不清楚 错误 2 to have face-to-face communication 不定式一般是表示没有发生而有可能发生的事 情 正确的句子 :We should not ignore face-to-face communication. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (communication) 还可以用状语从句扩充 We should not ignore face-to-face communication because this has a direct impact on social relationships. 还可以用并列句扩充 Internet can enrich our social lives, but we should not ignore face to face communication, because this has a direct impact on social relationships. 中文翻译 : 网络能够丰富我们的生活, 但是我们不应该忽视面对面的交流因为它对社会关 系有直接影响 翻译 21 随着年龄增长, 很难和朋友和家人保持联系错误的句子 :As the growing age, people is hard to connect with their families and friends frequently. 错误 1 As the growing age 没有这个表达错误 2 people is 主谓不一致错误 3 人无难易之分错误 4 connect frequently 不搭配正确的句子 :With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends. 句子结构 : 主语 (people)+ 谓语 (find)+ 宾语 (it, 形式宾语 ) + 宾语补足语 (difficult), 而不定式是真正的宾语注 :contact 动词的时候是及物动词, 不能加介词,people find it easy to contact their friends today.

17 学生的句子 :With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, due to fact that they are occupied with career development and advance education. 错误 = advance education 没有这个表达错误 4 connect frequently 不搭配正确的句子 :With age, people find it difficult to maintain contact with family and friends, as they are occupied with work and other commitments. 中文翻译 : 随着年龄的增加, 人们发现保持与亲人和朋友的联系变得困难, 因为他们被工作和其他任务占据 翻译 22 严格的惩罚是减少犯罪率的有效手段 错误的句子 :Stiff sentences is an effective method to decrease crime rates. 错误 1 主谓不一致 stiff sentences 错误 2 decrease crime rates 表达不是很好 正确的句子 :Stiff punishment is an effective method to reduce crime. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 ; 不定式 to reduce crime 还可以用名词性从句和状语从句扩充 It is suggested that stiff punishment is an effective method to reduce crime, as offenders are fearful of getting caught and less likely to commit crime. 中文翻译 : 严厉的处罚是减少犯罪的有效方法, 因为犯罪者害怕被抓而不太可能犯罪 翻译 23 政府对太空科技的投资可以支持错误的句子 :The investment on space technology should be supported by government. 错误 1 investment in 固定搭配错误 2 governments or the government 正确的句子 : The investment in space technology should be supported by the government.

18 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (support 被动语态 )+ 宾语 还可以用状语从句和并列句扩充 The investment in space technology should be supported by the government because the commercialization of such technology will bring more business opportunities and improve people's living standards. 中文翻译 : 政府应该支持对太空科技的投资因为这些科技的商业化会带来更多的商业机会, 提高人们的生活水平 翻译 24 有些公共服务很难收支平衡错误的句子 :Some public services have problems in break even. 错误 1 break 是动词, 在这里 in 是介词, 后面应该加动名词正确的句子 :Some public services have problems in breaking even. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (have)+ 宾语 (problems) 还可以用并列句扩充 Some public services have problems in breaking even and need government funds. 中文翻译 : 一些公共服务很难收支平衡, 需要政府资金 翻译 25 我们的环境还是很糟糕 错误的句子 :Our environment still be in a direstate. 错误 1 没有谓语动词 正确的句子 :Our environment is still in a dire state. 句子的结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 ( 介宾短语 in a dire state 充当 ) 还可以用状语从句扩充 Unless our modern lifestyle experiences a profound change, our environment will still be in a dire state.

19 或者 : Unless we make profound changes in modern lifestyles, our environment will remain in a dire state. 中文翻译 : 除非我们的现代生活方式有深远改变, 负责我们的环境还是会很糟 翻译 26 因为失业率高升, 大学生感到有压力去努力学习 错误的句子 :Undergraduates are forced to study under pressure due to severe situation of unemployment rate is ascending currently. 错误 1 due to 是介词, 后面要加名词 ( 多看手把手第二章, 跪求!) 错误 2 ascend, 坑爹替换词 正确的句子 : Undergraduates feel under increasing pressure to study hard, because of the soaring unemployment rate. 句子结构 : 主语 (undergraduates)+ 系动词 (feel)+ 表语 ( 介宾短语 under pressure 充当 ) 还可以用状语从句扩充 Students feel pressured to study hard because the unemployment rate is increasing. 翻译 27 免费上大学使得家景不好的学生有同等的上学机会 错误的句子 :Free tuition fees makes it possible for students from less well-off background have equal access to tertiary education. 错误 1 make it possible for somebody to do something. 错误 3 background 用复数 正确的句子 :Free university education makes it possible for students from less well-off backgrounds to have equal access to tertiary education. 注 :access 是不可数名词,access to something 习惯搭配 ;access 也可以是及物动词, 但是 一般没有 access education 这个说法 注 :tertiary education=university education

20 句子结构 : 句子结构 : 主语 + 谓语 + 宾语 (it, 形式宾语 ) + 宾语补足语 (difficult), 而不 定式 (to have equal access to tertiary education) 是真正的宾语 还可以用名词性从句 (believe that ) 和定语从句 (who agree with) 扩充 People who agree with free university education believe that this practice makes it possible for students from less well-off backgrounds to have equal access to tertiary education. 中文翻译 : 同意免费大学教育的人们认为该措施会使那些家境不好的学生有同等上大学的 机会 翻译 28 我们需要考虑社会和经济的环境 错误的句子 :We have to consider about social and economic context. 错误 1 consider 及物动词, 后面不需要加介词 正确的句子 :We have to consider the social and economic context. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 还可以用分词结构扩充 We have to consider the social and economic context when analysing the root causes of juvenile delinquency. 中文翻译 : 当分析青少年犯罪的根本原因的时候, 我们应该考虑社会和经济环境 翻译 29 基因工程让人们能培养新品种农作物错误的句子 :Genetic engineering allows people to nurture new species crops. 错误 1 species crops 语序有问题正确的句子 :Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (people)+ 宾语补足语 (to nurture ) 拓展的句子 :

21 Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties that are resistant to drought, thereby improving land productivity. 中文翻译 : 基因工程使人们能培育出抗旱的农作物品种, 因此可以提高土地利用率 翻译 30 密度种植对生物多样性造成了威胁 错误的句子 :Intensive farming poses a threat to stemming the lose of bio-diversity. 错误 1 pose a threat to stemming the loss of bio-diversity, 太罗嗦了 错误 2 lose 是动词,OF 前后一般要有名词 正确的句子 :Intensive farming can pose a threat to bio-diversity. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (threat) 还可以用并列句扩充 Intensive farming has a great impact on natural flora and can pose a threat to bio-diversity. 中文翻译 : 密集种植对野生植物有巨大影响, 对物种多样性有巨大威胁 其他选择 Intensive farming has a seriously negative impact on natural flora, and this may pose a threat to sustainable development of agriculture. 中文翻译 : 密集种植对天然植物有严重的负面影响, 这可能对农业的可持续发展有威胁 翻译 31 没有受过高等教育的年轻人只能找到低技术的工作错误的句子 :Young people without tertiary education qualifications normally have low-skilled jobs. 错误 1 have low-skilled jobs 里的 have 语气比较弱, 应该是只能找到 正确的句子 :Young people without tertiary education qualifications normally end up working in low-skilled jobs. 句子结构 : 主语 + 不及物动词 (end up)

22 还可以用名词性从句, 并列句来扩充 There is a widely held notion that young people without tertiary education qualifications normally end up working in low-skilled jobs and this can compromise the quality of life. 中文翻译 : 一个取得广泛共识的概念是没有大学文凭的年轻人通常只能找低技术含量的工 作, 这也危害到他们的生活质量 翻译 32 体育课可以促进身体健康, 增强信心 错误的句子 :The PE class not only improves students physical conditions but also boosts their confidence. 错误 1 not only but also 一般引导并列的 联系不密切的东西, 而不是有因果关系的东西 在这里, improve physical conditions 很明显会 boosts their confidence, 具备因果关系 错误 2 students' 所有格 正确的句子 :The PE class improves students physical conditions and boosts their confidence. 句子结构 : 两个并列句, 结构分别都是主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 还可以用状语从句扩充 We should recognise the importance of the PE class, as it improves students' physical conditions and boosts their confidence. 中文翻译 : 我们应该认识到体育课的重要性, 因为它可以促进学生的身心健康, 增强他们 的自信心 其他选择 : While academic performance is highly valued, we should not lose sight of the importance of students' physical condition. 中文翻译 : 尽管学术表现被高度重视, 但我们不应该忽视学生的身体健康的重要性 翻译 33 历史文物因为它的历史重要性而被保存 错误的句子 :Antique heritages should be completely preserved due to its historical importance.

23 错误 1 Antique heritages 没有这个表达错误 2 heritage 是个不可数名词错误 3 既然主语是复数, 为什么后面用代词 its 正确的句子 :Historical relics should be preserved for their historical significance. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (preserve 被动语态 )+ 宾语 翻译 34 学校活动的设置要能让孩子体会到成就感和提升他们的幸福 错误的句子 :The main purpose of the school activities which can give the children's a sense of accomplishment is to promote the students's well being 错误 1 主语里加了个定语从句, 太长 错误 2 给学生成功感和提升学生的幸福应该不是方式和目的 正确的句子 :Sports and other school activities can be designed to give children a sense of accomplishment and to promote their well-being.. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (design 的被动语态 ) 注 : 也可以说 improve well-being. 注意我在句子里加了个体育, 就是简单的一个例子, 读者就清楚你想表达的东西 好的文 章是可读的, 内容充实的, 而很多同学的问题是比较死板和枯燥地将一些单词放进去 翻译 35 一些员工被鼓励着去打破陈规错误的句子 :Employee can breakthrough the obsoleted rules. 错误 1 breakthrough 是个名词, 没动词错误 2 obsoleted 没有这个词, 只有 obsolete 错误 3 employee 为什么用单数, 只有一个员工? 正确的句子 :Some employees are encouraged to break the mould.

24 句子的结构 : 主语 ( 省略 )+ 及物动词 (encourage 被动 )+ 宾语 (employees 变成了主语 ) + 宾语补足语 (to break the mould) 还可以用定语从句扩充 Nowadays, companies prefer those employees who can break the mould. 中文翻译 : 现在公司喜欢能够打破常规的员工 翻译 36 平等的教育能帮助解决学生学习成绩不好 错误的句子 :Equal access to education can overcome educational underachievement. 错误 1 overcome educational underachievement 搭配不好 ; educational underachievement 是指学生成绩不好的意思 正确的句子 :Equal access to education can help tackle educational underachievement. 句子的结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (help)+ 宾语 (to tackle. 这里省略了 to) 还可以用定语从句扩充 Local authorities should ensure equal access to education, which can help tackle educational underachievement, a problem found among disadvantaged children. a problem 在这里是个同位语, 指代前面的 educational underachievement ; 而 found among disadvantaged children 过去分词, 充当定语 中文翻译 : 当地政府应该保证平等教育, 这样能够帮助落后学生去解决学习的落后 翻译 37 种族歧视仍然很严重 错误的句子 :People find it hard to overcome the racial stereotyping and discrimination against some social groups. 错误这个句子比较大的问题就是主语是 PEOPLE 就是被歧视的人, 最后又跑到句末做 against 的宾语 正确的句子 :Racial stereotyping and discrimination remains a serious problem. 句子的结构 : 主语 + 系动词 (remain)+ 表语

25 注 : 如果学生觉得 stereotyping and discrimination 是两个事情, 动词也可以用 remain 还可以用状语从句扩充 Racial stereotyping and discrimination remains a serious problem, although governments promote equality. 中文翻译 : 虽然政府促进平等, 但是种族歧视仍然是一个严重问题 翻译 38 接触不同的文化可以促进创新 错误的句子 :Contacting with a wide variety of cultures can promot the creativity of native culture. 错误 1 Contacting with 中国式英文 错误 2 native culture 别扭, 不知道为什么要说本土文化 正确的句子 :Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity. 句子的结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 还可以用定语从句扩充 Exposure to different cultures can encourage creativity, which is an asset for enterprises or countries. 中文翻译 : 接触不同的文化能够促进创新, 这是企业或者国家的财富 翻译 39 一些人不支持转基因食品错误的句子 :People hold the objection to the proliferation of genetically modified food. 错误 1 "hold the objection to " 这个表达很不好, 而且罗嗦正确的句子 :Some people disapprove of genetically modified food. 句子结构 : 主语 + 不及物动词 (disapprove) 还可以用原因状语从句扩充

26 Some people disapprove of genetically modified food, as they believe that this type of food does more harm than good. 中文翻译 : 一些人反对转基因食品, 因为他们认为这种食品的弊大于利 翻译 40 上下班的时间变得更长了错误的句子 :Commuter time was prolonged because of traffic congestion. 错误 1 Commuter time 不是固定词伙错误 2 was 时态错误正确的句子 :Commuting time has been prolonged because of traffic congestion. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (prolong 被动语态 )+ 宾语中文翻译 : 因为堵车上下班时间变得更长 翻译 41 旅游景点竭力满足游客的需要和品味错误的句子 :Tourist spots devote to fulfilling tourists' tastes and needs. 错误 1 devote 是及物动词, 后面要有宾语错误 2 fulfil tastes 不是个习惯词伙 正确的句子 :Tourist spots endeavor to cater for tourists' tastes and needs. 句子结构 : 主语 + 不及物动词 ;to do 不定式 翻译 42 电脑技能可以运用到学习工作中错误的句子 :Computering applying in their academic study as well as their career life 错误 1 applying 谓语不完整错误 2 career life 这个词伙不是很恰当正确的句子 :Computer skills can be applied in their studies as well as their working lives.

27 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (apply 的被动语态 )+ 宾语 还可以用定语从句扩充 Students can acquire computer skills which can be applied in their studies as well as their working lives. 中文翻译 : 学生们可以获得电脑技术, 这些技术可以应用在他们的学习和工作中 翻译 43 社区改造为罪犯提供了获得职业技能的机会 错误的句子 :Replacing the long sentence by working for the locals provides offenders with transferable skills. 错误 1 主语很别扭, 两个东西没有替换性 正确的句子 :Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (offenders)+ 宾语补足语 (with opportunities to ) 还可以用并列句扩充 Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released. 中文翻译 : 社区服务给犯人提供获得实用技能的机会, 给他们好的起点当他们被释放后 翻译 44 政府应该重视社会福利, 尤其是医疗服务 错误的句子 :The government should give a priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare 错误 1 give priority to 没有 a 正确的句子 :The government should give priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare. 句子的结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语还可以用名词性从句, 定语从句扩充

28 When it comes to distribution of public funds, some people suggest that the government should give priority to social welfare, especially the healthcare, which helps stop the disadvantaged population dying needlessly. 中文翻译 : 当谈论到公共资金的分配时, 一些人认为政府重视社会福利, 尤其是医疗服务, 这会帮助阻止弱势群体无助地死去 翻译 45 在竞争激烈的社会, 有工作的人关心职业发展 错误的句子 :In the highly competitive society, working adults are usually focusing on career advancement. 错误 1 应该用 a, 而不是 the, 否则, 别人还以为世界上只有一个激烈竞争的社会 错误 2 进行时态有点怪 正确的句子 :In a highly competitive society, working adults usually focus on career advancement. 句子结构 : 主语 + 不及物动词 (focus) 还可以用并列句扩充 In a highly competitive society, working adults usually focus on career advancement, and have difficulty in achieving work-life balance. 中文翻译 : 在竞争激烈的社会中, 有工作的人关心职业发展, 很难实现工作和生活的平衡 翻译 46 经常运动使得人们保持健康的心态错误的句子 :Doing exercises regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind. 错误 1 Doing exercises 一般是不可数正确的句子 :Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 (people)+ 宾语补足语 (to maintain 省略了 to) 还可以用并列句扩充

29 Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress. 中文翻译 : 经常做运动帮助人们保持一个健康的心态, 是他们更容易应对压力 翻译 47 审美观是因文化而异的 错误的句子 :Perception of beauty is differed from culture to culture. 错误 differ 是不及物动词, 没有被动语态 正确的句子 : Perception of beauty differs from culture to culture. 句子结构 : 主语 + 不及物动词 ; from culture to culture 介宾短语充当状语 翻译 48: 环境保护运动可以跨越国界 错误的句子 :Environmental protection campaign can across national boundaries. 错误 1 across 是介词, 这里缺乏一个动词 错误 2 campaign 可数名词, 要加冠词, 或者复数 正确的句子 :Environmental protection campaigns can transcend national boundaries. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 翻译 49: 规则可能会限制人的创造性 错误的句子 :The regulations may stifled creativity of human beings. 错误 1: 名词复数一般不需要加定冠词, 除非你想特指 错误 2:may 这些词后面要用动词原形 错误 3:human being 很多时候是 人类 的意思, 反义词是动物或者是什么 正确的句子 : Regulations may stifle people s creativity.

30 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 翻译 50: 大部分的环境破坏都可以归咎于人类的活动 错误的句子 :The most of environmental degradation is contributed to human activities. 错误 1:the most 一般加形容词, 作为最高级错误 2 : contribute to 一般用主动, 而且和 attributed to 是相反的意思 正确的句子 : Most of environmental degradation is attributed to human activities. 句子结构 : 原句是 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语 (attribute something to something) 这个句子是被动语态 翻译 51: 不健康的生活方式让人们处于生病的危险之中 错误的句子 : Unhealthy lifestyle is likely to make people at risk of illness. 错误 1: make somebody do something 或者是 make somebody + 形容词是更常见的用法 错误 2:lifestyle 可数名词, 要加冠词, 或者复数正确的句子 :An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness. 句子结构 : 主语 (An unhealthy lifestyle)+ 及物动词 (put)+ 宾语 (people)+ 宾语补足语 (at risk of illness) 翻译 52: 建造住宅楼有助于解决城市的拥挤问题 错误的句子 :Building apartment blocks contribute to solve the crowed problem in cities 错误 1 building 是动名词, 主谓不一致错误 2 contribute to 后面要加名词, 而不是动词原形错误 3 crowed problem 没有这个表达

31 正确的句子 :Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 (helps)+ 宾语 (solve overcrowding, 省略了 to, 本来是不定式 to solve overcrowding) 拓展的句子 :Building apartment blocks helps solve overcrowding in cities,because it can contain more people with limited space. 错误 :contain more people 搭配不是很好正确的句子 :Apartment blocks, which make the most of land and space, help solve overcrowding in cities. 中文翻译 : 住宅楼由于其能最大限度地利用土地和空间, 所以有助于解决城市的拥挤问题 翻译 53 贫穷的人可以通过努力工作来提高社会地位 错误的句子 :People at disadvantage are likely to improve their social status by working hard, studying hard. 错误 1 at disadvantage 没有这个表达 错误 2 working hard, studying hard 没有连词 正确的句子 :People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard. 句子结构 : 主语 (people)+ 及物动词 (improve)+ 宾语 (status), from disadvantaged backgrounds 是 people 的定语 还可以用并列句扩展 People from disadvantaged backgrounds can improve their social status by working hard and this seems an arduous but rewarding process. 中文翻译 : 贫穷的人可以通过努力工作来提高社会地位, 这看起来是一个辛苦但有效的过 程

32 翻译 54: 死记乘法表并不是提高算术能力的最好方式 错误的句子 : Learning time tables by rote are not the best way that improves arithmetic ability. 错误 1: 动名词做主语, 谓语动词应该是 is 错误 2: way that 定语从句, 太过繁琐正确的句子 :Learning the times table by rote is not the best way to improve numeracy 句子结构 : 主语 (Learning the times table by rote)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (the best way); 而 to improve numeracy 是后置定语修饰 way 翻译 55: 贫穷国家的首要问题是满足人们基本生存需求 错误的句子 :Deprived countries concern how to satisfy citizens' requirements of survive. 错误 1 concern 类似于 worry 或者 involve, 在这里都不对 错误 2 requirements 语意理解错误 错误 3 Of 后面要加名词, 而 survive 是动词 正确的句子 :The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs. 句子的结构 : 主语 (priority)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (to satisfy citizens basic needs) 拓展的句子 : The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs, which is an effective method to sustain social stability 错误 : 定语从句的先行词不清楚 正确的句子 :The top priority for deprived countries is to satisfy citizens' basic needs, and by doing this, governments can sustain social stability. 中文翻译 : 贫穷国家的首要问题是满足人们基本生存需求, 这是维持国家稳定一个有效方 法 翻译 56: 许多孩子每天接触暴力内容 错误的句子 : Many children are expose to violent contents in every day.

33 错误 1 content 这个时候经常是不可数错误 2 expose 是及物动词, be + do 不准确错误 3 every day 本身可以充当状语, 不可以加介词 in 正确的句子 : Many children are exposed to violent content every day. 句子结构 : 主语 + 及物动词 ( 被动语态 ) (are exposed)+ 宾语补足语 (to violent content) 原句可能是 something exposes children to violent content ( 主语 + 及物动词 + 宾语 + 宾语补足语 ) 拓展的句子 :Many children are exposed to violent content every day, then acting up the crime. Because they treat it as a normal part of everyday life. 错误 1:because 是从属连词, 要加两个句子错误 2:act up 有问题, 没必要用分词 正确的句子 :Many children are exposed to violent content every day and prone to act up, because they treat it as a normal part of everyday life. 中文翻译 : 很多每天接触暴力内容的孩子容易用暴力, 因为他们把暴力当作日常生活的一部分 翻译 57: 因为全球化, 人们需要和来自不同背景的人工作 错误的句子 :Because of the globalisation, people should work with others who comes from different backgrounds. 错误 1 the globalization 的 the 比较多余 错误 2 who comes from 没有必要用定语从句 错误 3 should 有点过分了, 必须 的意思 正确的句子 :Because of globalisation, people need to work with those from diverse backgrounds. 注 : 这里的 those 就是其他人的意思, 不能说 those people, 这样会和主语重复

34 句子结构 : 主语 (people)+ 及物动词 (need)+ 宾语 (to work), because of globalisation 介 宾短语充当状语 翻译 58: 家庭环境被认为是小孩成长最重要的影响 错误的句子 :Family environment is widely thought to be the most important influence on children development. 错误 children development 没有所有格正确的句子 :Family environment is widely thought/believed to be the most important influence on children s development. 句子结构 : 主语 (family environment)+ 及物动词的被动语态 (thought + 宾语补足语 (to be) 翻译 59: 在大城市有一些贫困的社区 错误的句子 : in large-scale cities have some deprived communities 错误 in large-scale cities 介宾短语不能够充当主语正确的句子 : There are some economically deprived communities in large cities. 句子结构 : there be 句型 翻译 60: 奖学金可以鼓励更多的学生去学习研究生课程 错误的句子 : Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum. 错误 1 scholarship 可数名词, 应该有复数或者冠词错误 2 regarded as something 太过罗嗦错误 3 curriculum 不是 course 的替换词,curriculum 的意思是课程大纲正确的句子 :Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduate courses.

35 句子结构 : 主语 (government grants)+ 及物动词 (encourage)+ 宾语 (students)+ 宾语补足语 (to take postgraduate courses) 翻译 61: 我们需要采取措施去解决一些棘手的问题 错误的句子 :We must take measurement to tackle thorny problems. 错误 measurement 的意思是测量正确的句子 : We need to have measures in place to solve some intractable problems. 句子结构 : 主语 (we)+ 及物动词 (need)+ 宾语 (to have.) 翻译 62: 经费削减让很多年轻人很难接受大学教育 错误的句子 : Cutting the budget of the education pose a threat to the opportunities of the young people who want to take part in the higher education. 错误 1: 动名词 Cutting 做主语, 但是谓语动词没有用单数 错误 2:pose a threat to the opportunities 搭配不好 错误 3: 后面用定语从句也是过分累赘,opportunities to do something 是习惯的表达 很 多中国学生习惯的问题是把表达复杂化, 觉得那样才是好作文, 而 native speaker 更加注 意文字的简练和清楚 正确的句子 : Budget cuts make it difficult for many young people to receive a college education. 句子结构 : 主语 (Budget cuts)+ 及物动词 (make)+ 宾语 (it 形式宾语 )+ 宾语补足语 (difficult); 这个句子真正的宾语是 to receive a college education 翻译 63: 按照能力分班和学生的成绩没有明显的联系 错误的句子 :There is no clear link between selection in terms of students' ability and their academic performance.

36 错误 : in terms of 是一个被中国学生用烂的词, 有时候过分罗嗦正确的句子 :There is no clear link between grouping students by ability and their levels of attainment. 句子结构 :there be 句型 翻译 64: 随着越来越多的年轻人参加志愿者工作, 社区的凝聚力 (cohesion) 会加强错误的句子 with more young people join the volunteer works, community's cohension will be enhanced. 错误 1 with 是介词, 后面不能加句子错误 2 work 不可数名词, 不能加复数正确的句子 :With an increasing number of young people participating in volunteer work, community cohesion will be enhanced. 句子结构 : 主语 (community cohesion)+ 及物动词的被动语态 (be enhanced) 翻译 65: 基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知 错误的句子 The impact that genetic food has on our health still remains unknown. 错误 1 其实定语从句中, 最好要规避这种先行词充当从句宾语的情况, 读起来比较别扭 错误 2 remains 已经包含 still 错误 3 genetic food 这个表达也不是很好 正确的句子 :The health effect of GE food remains unclear/yet to be known. 句子结构 : 主语 (health effect)+ 系动词 (remains)+ 表语 (unclear) 也可以用状语从句拓展 The health effect of GE food remains unclear, so clear food labeling is strongly advocated.

37 注 :clear food labeling 就是商场食品上清晰的标签 ( 说清楚食物的特点 ) 中文翻译 : 基因食物对健康的影响仍然未知, 所以清楚的食物标签被强烈提倡 翻译 66: 移民有时候被认为是社会团结的一个威胁 错误的句子 Immigrants sometimes was recognised as a threat to the social cohesion. 错误 1 为什么要过去时? 错误 2 主谓不一致错误 3 cohesion 不可数名词, 为什么要用 the 去特指? 正确的句子 :Immigrants are sometimes recognised as a threat to social cohesion. 句子结构 : 原句可能是 people sometimes recognise immigrants as a threat ( 主语 people+ 及物动词 recognise+ 宾语 immigrants+ 宾语补足语 as a threat), 这句话是被动语态 翻译 67: 教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键 错误的句子 :Teaching quality has regarded as a key factor to student's academic performance. 错误 1 has regarded 这个不是被动语态的完成时态 错误 2 应该是 students 正确的句子 :The quality of teaching has been identified as central to students academic performance. 句子结构 : 原句可能是 people have identified the quality of teaching as central to students academic performance ( 主语 people+ 及物动词 identify+ 宾语 quality of teaching + 宾语 补足语 as central), 这句话是被动语态 也可以用并列句拓展 The quality of teaching has been identified as central to students academic performance, and therefore, parents prefer to choose prestigious schools for children. 中文翻译 : 教学的质量被认为是决定学生成绩的关键, 因此, 家长喜欢为孩子选择名校

38 翻译 68: 法律应该将醉驾变成刑事犯罪 错误的句子 :the government should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence. 错误定语从句还原是 a law is drunk driving 显然不对 中国学生有个误区, 就是一定要写个从句, 才能加分 正确的句子 :Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence. 句子结构 : 主语 (legislation)+ 及物动词 (make)+ 宾语 (drink driving)+ 宾语补足语 (a criminal offence) 翻译 69: 网络购物对于很多人已经成为生活中的很普通的一部分 错误的句子 :It has become an important part for most people to shop online in daily life. 错误 part of daily life 是固定的说法正确的句子 :Online shopping has become a normal part of people s everyday life. 句子结构 : 主语 + 系动词 + 表语 翻译 70: 乡村地区给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音 错误的句子 :rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 错误 1:rural area 可数名词, 没有冠词, 或者复数 错误 2:opportunity 在这里用复数比较好 正确的句子 :Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 句子结构 : 主语 (rural areas)+ 及物动词 (provide) + 宾语 (people)+ 宾语补足语 (with opportunities) 拓展的句子 : Rural area is beneficial to people's fitness, because it provides people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.

39 错误 :rural area 可数名词, 没有冠词, 或者复数 两个句子的主语都一样, 还不如用分词正确的句子 :Rural areas are beneficial to people's health, providing people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life. 中文翻译 : 乡村地区对人们的健康有益, 因为它给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音 翻译 71: 在一个消费社会里, 人们不再满足生活必需品 (bare necessities 错误的句子 :in a throw-away society, people are not satisfied with bare necessities any more. 错误 1:throw-away society 这个词伙不对 错误 2:not any more 一般是形容量的东西, 而 no longer 强调动作的持续 正确的句子 :in the consumer society, people are no longer satisfied with bare necessities. 翻译 72: 电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化 错误的句子 :The impact on people's cultural level from computer, varies between ages. 错误 1:cultural level 表达不对 错误 2:varies between ages 表达不对 错误 3:the impact from the computer 表达不对 正确的句子 :The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages. 句子结构 : 主语 (impact)+ 不及物动词 (varies); of computers on literacy skills 都是定语拓展的句子 ( 使用并列句 ): The impact of computers on literacy skills varies across ages and teachers have mixed feelings on the usage of computers. 中文翻译 : 电脑对人的文化程度的影响随着年龄变化, 老师对电脑的用法有复杂的感情

40 翻译 73: 媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众 错误的句子 :Medias exaggerate the hurt of victims to attract public attentions. 错误 1:Media 本身就是复数 错误 2:hurt 是动词,OF 前后要加名词 错误 3:attentions 不可数名词 正确的句子 :The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims suffering. 句子结构 : 主语 (the media)+ 及物动词 (attracts)+ 宾语 (attention); 方式状语 拓展的句子 :The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignore harmful consequences bring to them, such as their exposure to the public. 错误 1: while 是从属连词, 后面不能直接加动词原形 错误 2 ignore 和 bring 两个动词 错误 3 them 指代不清楚 正确的句子 :The media attracts public attention by sensationalising victims suffering, while ignoring harmful consequences to these individuals, such as their exposure to the public. 中文翻译 : 媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众, 而忽视对这些观众的有害结果, 比如 将他们在公众面前曝光 翻译 74: 人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果 错误的句子 :Unhealthy lifestyle is the result of trend to rely on science and technology. 错误 1:Unhealthy lifestyle 是可数名词, 需要加冠词错误 2: trend toward doing something 还有 tendency to do something 正确的句子 :People s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology. 句子结构 : 主语 (unhealthy lifestyle)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (the result); of 全是定语

41 拓展的句子 :People s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, because this makes their lives more convenience. 错误 1:convenience 是名词 错误 2:because 引导的原因状语从句不清晰, 到底是解释 unhealthy lifestyle, 还是解释 rely heavily on technology? 正确的句子 :People s unhealthy lifestyle is the result of their tendency to rely heavily on technology, despite the fact that technology has made their lives convenient and improved their lives significantly. 中文翻译 : 人们不健康的生活方式是他们倾向于依赖科技的结果, 尽管事实上科技让他们 的生活更加方便, 给他们的生活带来很大提高 翻译 75: 贫穷是社区犯罪上升的原因 错误的句子 :The reason which cause increasely number of community crimes in society is poverty. 错误 1:reason which cause, 从句的主谓不一致, 而且搭配不好 错误 2:increasely number 副词不能修饰名词 错误 3: 这个学生硬是把简单的事情罗嗦地说出来, 很别扭 雅思考试考的是语言的通顺 和地道, 而不是考你的句子是否够复杂 正确的句子 : Poverty is responsible for the crime wave in many communities. 句子结构 : 主语 (poverty)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (responsible) 拓展的句子 : Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, that means people's traveling will become more convenience and safety. 错误 1: 一般来说是 this means that 错误 2:become 是系动词, 后面加形容词去修饰主语 错误 3:safety 和前面 low cost carriers 没什么联系

42 正确的句子 :Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades, and this means that people are tempted to travel more frequently than before. 中文翻译 : 因为费用的下降, 航空最近几十年发展得很快, 这意味着人们会比以前更多旅 游 翻译 76: 因为费用的下降, 航空最近几十年发展得很快 错误的句子 :The airline has sharp development in recent decades, with the cost decline. 错误 1:in recent decades 一般要用现在完成时态, 这句话没有 错误 2: has sharp development 表达比较别扭 错误 3:with 是个介词, 后面不能加句子 正确的句子 :Because of low-cost carriers, the aviation industry has developed at an astounding pace over the past decades. 句子结构 : 主语 (the aviation industry)+ 不及物动词 (developed); Because of low-cost carriers 原因状 语 ; over the past decades 时间状语 ; at an astounding pace 程度状语 翻译 77: 非法捕杀导致某些动物的灭亡, 生物多样性也会损失 错误的句子 :Hunting illegally leads to the extinct of species, as well as, biodiversity is deteriorated. 错误 1:extinct 是个形容词错误 2:as well as 后面一般加名词, 动名词, 或者是比较状语从句的分句, 很少加完整的句子 正确的句子 :Illegal hunting leads to extinction of some species and the loss of biodiversity. 主语 (Illegal hunting)+ 及物动词 (leads to)+ 宾语 (extinction)

43 翻译 78: 动物实验有时候不能够检验出药物的不良副作用 错误的句子 :Animal experiment is occasionally unable to examine drugs side effects. 错误 1:Animal experiment 可数名词, 要加负数错误 2:occasionally 意思是 偶尔地, 极少地 错误 3:drugs side effects 没有使用所有格正确的句子 :Animal experiments fail to detect the undesirable side effects of drugs. 翻译 79: 电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分 错误的句子 :The invention of electric vehicles is a part of our efforts aiming at preserving the environment. 错误 1: 一般是 part of 错误 2: effort to do something 更为通顺, 在这里 正确的句子 :The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment. 句子结构 : 主语 (The invention of electric vehicles)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (part ); of 全是定语 拓展的句子 :The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment, because electric vehicles do not conduct exhaust emission, compared with fossil fuel motors 错误 1:electric vehicles 重复 错误 2:conduct exhaust emission 搭配问题 错误 3:fossil fuel motors 用词不好,MOTOR 是马达的意思 正确的句子 :The invention of electric vehicles is part of our effort to sustain the environment because these vehicles create less exhaust fumes than conventional cars. 中文翻译 : 电子汽车的发明是我们维护环境所做努力的其中一部分, 因为这些汽车比传统 汽车产生较少的废气

44 翻译 80: 有时候, 很难去评估人类行为的环境代价 错误的句子 :Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental costs of people s behaviors. 错误 1:environmental cost 在这里用单数就好, 因为是在说整个影响, 而不是不同的影响 错误 2:behaviour 英式拼写错误 3:behaviour 在这里不用 activities 好, 因为行为是指人的瞬间举动,activities 一般是持续时间比较长 正确的句子 :Sometimes, it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost human activities. 句子结构 : 主语 (it)+ 系动词 (is)+ 表语 (difficult); 而 to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities 不定式充当形式主语 拓展的句子 : Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, there is a necessity for the government enacting legislations to restrict some behaviors, which can also arise people's concern about environmental degradation. 错误 1:there is a necessity for 别扭 错误 2:arise 不及物动词 错误 3: 状语从句后, 再写那么长的定语从句就多余了 正确的句子 :Sometimes, although it is difficult to evaluate the environmental cost of human activities, it is necessary to enact laws to restrict some behaviours. 中文翻译 : 有时候, 虽然很难去评估人类行为的环境代价, 但是应该颁布法律以限制这些 行为 翻译 81: 人口老龄化促使国家去放松退休年龄的限制 错误的句子 :Compulsory retirement age will be abolished, and the reason is attributed to population aging and urban.

45 错误 1:retirement age 是可数名词 错误 2:reason is attributed to 这个搭配不好 正确的句子 :the ageing population has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 句子结构 : 主语 (ageing population)+ 及物动词 (prompt)+ 宾语 (countries)+ 宾语补足语 (to raise ) 拓展的句子 :The ageing population leads to a shortage of skillful workers, a problem which has promote countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 错误 : 应该是 skilled workers. Skillful 表示人们做某事的时候所展示的技艺娴熟 正确的句子 :The ageing population leads to a shortage of highly skilled workers, a problem which has prompted countries to raise the statutory retirement age. 注 :a problem 在这里是同位语, 指代前面的 shortage 中文翻译 : 人口老龄化导致高级技术工人的短缺, 这个问题已经促使国家提高了法定退休 年龄 翻译 82: 学校应该允许老师强制捣蛋的小孩离开教室 错误的句子 :Schools should allow teachers to make the children with disruptive behaviours go out of classrooms. 错误 :children with disruptive behaviours 略显罗嗦 正确的句子 :Teachers should be permitted to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom. 原句 :Schools should permit teachers to use force to remove disruptive children from the classroom. 句子结构 : 主语 (schools)+ 及物动词 (permit)+ 宾语 (teachers)+ 宾语补足语 (to use force ) 翻译 83: 很多人觉得自己有必要赶时尚

46 错误的句子 :Many people think that they are necessary to chaes after fashion. 错误 : 人没有 necessary 这么一说 ; chase 在这里用作及物动词比较好 正确的句子 :Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion. 句子结构 : 主语 (many people)+ 及物动词 (consider)+ 形式宾语 (it)+ 宾语补足语 (necessary); 真正的宾语是 to follow fashion. 拓展的句子 :Many people consider it necessary to follow fashion; otherwise, they believe they are behind the times. 中文翻译 : 很多人觉得有必要赶时尚 ; 否则的话, 他们相信自己过时了