說明開始補驟 1: 在此省略步驟 2 : 切割分句原本第一段有 8 句 : 興大康堤大掃除, 國際生協助清掃校園! 響應 96 週年校慶, 中興大學國際處 10 月 23 日下午發起國際生清掃興大康堤活動, 共有來自五大洲 11 個國家 36 名學生報名參加, 包含德國泰國越南甘比亞史瓦

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1 中翻英練習 - 斷句與主詞找尋興大國際生康堤淨溪賀校慶 - 翻譯實作建議施彥如老師步驟 1 : 詳讀原文並參考範本詳細閱讀中文全文, 了解整體概念架構與脈絡同時必須參考閱讀相關主題的文章, 如淨灘淨河等相關英文文章, 這個步驟十分重要, 因為這能協助譯者從過程中整理出相關主題的關鍵字彙文句與說法, 若有需要也可以用 excel 檔案建立一個 data bank 留存日後使用步驟 2 & 3 : 整理文句與主詞尋找有鑑本案中文句較短, 翻譯前可先考量如何將數個中文句子組成一個英文句子 ( 或反之亦然 ), 如興大康堤大掃除, 國際生協助清掃校園! 響應 96 週年校慶, 在漢語中為三句, 在英文中結合為一句 ; 中興大學國際處 10 月 23 日下午發起國際生清掃興大康堤活動, 共有來自五大洲 11 個國家 36 名學生報名參加, 在原文中為兩句, 英文中可合併為一句 ( 有些中文文章句子較長, 譯者可把一句中文切成兩三句英文句子, 這也是有可能的 ) 在此階段必須針對每個規劃好的英文句子找出主詞與動詞, 並可以先進行口頭將初步的句型翻出來 ( 細節可先略過 ), 聽聽看是否通順可行步驟 4 : 進行完整翻譯把翻譯寫出來, 全部翻完後將譯文從頭到尾多讀幾次, 或是朗誦出來, 以確定上下文連接與邏輯通順

2 說明開始補驟 1: 在此省略步驟 2 : 切割分句原本第一段有 8 句 : 興大康堤大掃除, 國際生協助清掃校園! 響應 96 週年校慶, 中興大學國際處 10 月 23 日下午發起國際生清掃興大康堤活動, 共有來自五大洲 11 個國家 36 名學生報名參加, 包含德國泰國越南甘比亞史瓦濟蘭中國大陸等國的學生加入清理河堤的行列, 大家一起掃落葉清垃圾拔雜草將第一段整合為 3 句大康堤大掃除, 國際生協助清掃校園,( 以 ) 響應 96 週年校慶中興大學國際處 10 月 23 日下午發起國際生清掃興大康堤活動, 共有來自五大洲 11 個國家 36 名學生報名參加, 包含德國泰國越南甘比亞史瓦濟蘭中國大陸等國的學生加入清理河堤的行列, 大家一起掃落葉清垃圾拔雜草原本第二段有 9 句中興大學希望能營造一個輕鬆的活動環境, 讓國際生與本地生可進行互動交流, 許多國際生也希望能參與校內事務, 為學校服務而此次的志工淨溪活動專為國際生及陸生舉辦, 除達到校慶前清理環境的目的外, 對學生也是一個很健康的活動, 希望國際生對學校更有參與感, 也可帶動愛護校園的風潮, 希望大家在心有餘力時願意將自己的時間和能力貢獻出來翻成英文時, 將第二段整合為 5 句中興大學希望能營造一個輕鬆的活動環境, 讓國際生與本地生可進行互動交流, 許多國際生也希望能參與校內事務, 為學校服務而此次的志工淨溪活動專為國際生及陸生舉辦, 除達到校慶前清理環境的目的外, 對學生也是一個很健康的活動, 讓國際生對學校更有參與感, 希望大家在心有餘力時願意將自己的時間和能力貢獻出來

3 步驟 3: 確認主詞與動詞, 並先以口頭嘗試翻譯, 看看句型是否可行將第一段整合為 3 句大康堤 ( The Cambridge Watercourse) 大掃除, 國際生協助清掃校園! 響應 96 週年校慶 Option 1 [ 主詞 : Cambridge Watercourse ; 動詞 : receives a cleanup ] The Cambridge Watercourse by NCHU's campus receives a longawaited cleanup for the school's 96-year anniversary. Option 2 [ 主詞 : international students ; 動詞 : joined hands ] International students at NCHU joined hands in cleaning up the Cambridge Watercourse in celebration of the school s 96-year anniversary. 中興大學國際處 10 月 23 日下午發起國際生清掃興大康堤活動, 共有來自五大洲 11 個國家 36 名學生報名參加, Option 1 [ 主詞 : International Affairs Office ; 動詞 : mobilize/ invites students to join.] On October 23, the university's Office of International Affairs mobilizes foreign students enrolled in Chung Hsing for a river-cleaning initiative, attracting 36 participants from 11 countries, spanning all 5 continents. 也可翻成 : Option 2 [ 主詞 : the clean-up; 動詞 : took place and attracted] Organized by the university's Office of International Affairs, the river clean-up took place on October 23 and attracted 36 participants from 11 countries, spanning all 5 continents. 包含德國泰國越南甘比亞史瓦濟蘭中國大陸等國的學生加入清理河堤的行列, 大家一起掃落葉清垃圾拔雜草 Option 1 [ 主詞 : Students ; 動詞 : hail from A, B, C, and ] The participants hail from Germany, Thailand, Vietnam, Gambia, Swaziland, China, and other countries, who help with raking leaves, picking up trash, and pulling weeds. 或是 : Option 2 [ 主詞 : Students from A, B, C,. 動詞 : signed up for, participated in ] Students from Germany, Thailand, Vietnam, Gambia, Swaziland, China, and other countries rake leaves, pick up trash, and pull weeds as they

4 clean up the waterfront. 原本第二段有 9 句中興大學希望能營造一個輕鬆的活動環境, 讓國際生與本地生可進行互動交流, 許多國際生也希望能參與校內事務, 為學校服務而此次的志工淨溪活動專為國際生及陸生舉辦, 除達到校慶前清理環境的目的外, 對學生也是一個很健康的活動, 希望國際生對學校更有參與感, 也可帶動愛護校園的風潮, 希望大家在心有餘力時願意將自己的時間和能力貢獻出來翻成英文時, 將第二段整合為 5 句中興大學希望能營造一個輕鬆的活動環境, 讓國際生與本地生可進行互動交流, [ 主詞 : the university ; 動詞 : hopes to create ; is committed to... ] The university is committed to making its campus an internationalstudent-friendly space for cultural exchange activities. 或是 : The university has pledged to create a dynamic learning environment that promotes cultural exchange between local and international students. 許多國際生也希望能參與校內事務, 為學校服務 [ 主詞 : international students ; 動詞 : expressed a desire to ] Likewise, many international students have expressed a desire to participate in school affairs (get more involved in school affairs) and make a positive contribution. 而此次的志工淨溪活動專為國際生及陸生舉辦, [ 主詞 : the initiative/activity/event ; 動詞 : has been organized/initiated for ] This volunteer river-cleaning campaign has been organized specifically for international and Chinese students.

5 除達到校慶前清理環境的目的外, 對學生也是一個很健康的活動, 讓國際生對學校更有參與感, [ 主詞 : the clean-up; 動詞 : would be a healthful activity ] In addition to readying the campus for the anniversary celebration, the clean-up would be a healthful activity that helps to create a sense of community among local and international students. 也可翻成 : Apart from readying the campus for the anniversary celebration, the cleanup would be a healthful activity for the students, and make these international scholars more at home on campus. (or: give the international students a sense of participation and fulfillment). 希望大家在心有餘力時願意將自己的時間和能力貢獻出來 [ 主詞 : the school ; 動詞 : encourages everyone ] The school encourages everyone to contribute his or her spare time to making Chung Hsing University a greater school. 也可翻成 : Through activities like the initiative, the university hopes to inspire more students to contribute his or her spare time to creating a cleaner and better environment.

6 步驟四 : 進行完整翻譯全部翻完後將譯文從頭到尾多讀幾次, 或是朗誦出來, 以確定上下文連接與邏輯通順成品 : 版本一 The Cambridge Watercourse by NCHU's campus receives a long-awaited cleanup for the school's 96-year anniversary! On October 23, the university's Office of International Affairs mobilizes foreign students enrolled in Chung Hsing for a river-cleaning initiative, attracting 36 participants from 11 countries, spanning all 5 continents. The participants hail from Germany, Thailand, Vietnam, Gambia, Swaziland, China, and other countries, who help with raking leaves, picking up trash, and pulling weeds. The university is committed to making its campus an internationalstudent-friendly space for cultural exchange activities. Likewise, foreign students also express a desire to be more involved in school affairs and make a positive contribution. This volunteer river-cleaning campaign has been organized specifically for international and Chinese students. In addition to readying the campus for the anniversary celebration, the cleanup would be a healthful activity for the students, and make these international students more at home on campus. The school encourages everyone to contribute his or her spare time to making Chung Hsing a greater school. 成品 - 版本二 International students at NCHU joined hands in cleaning up the Cambridge Watercourse in celebration of the school s 96-year anniversary! Organized by the university's Office of International Affairs, the river clean-up took place on October 23 and attracted 36 participants from 11 countries, spanning all 5 continents. Students from Germany, Thailand, Vietnam, Gambia, Swaziland, China, and other countries rake leaves, pick up trash, and pull weeds as they clean up the waterfront. The university has pledged to create a dynamic learning environment that promotes cultural exchange between local and international students. Likewise, many international students have expressed a desire to participate in school affairs and make a positive contribution. This volunteer river-cleaning campaign has been organized specifically for international and Chinese students. In addition to readying the campus for the anniversary celebration, the clean-up would be a healthful activity that helps to create a sense of community among local and international students. Through activities like the initiative, the university hopes to inspire more students to contribute his or her spare time to creating a cleaner and better environment.

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