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1 Read, to Write A Good Story Anna Chung & Grace Lu 1 Audiences give a film 7 minutes. If the film does not interest the viewer within that time, the viewer feels disappointed. 2 Elia Kazan brilliant director of stage and screen & novelist

2 Today s impatient readers give a novelist fewer than 7 minutes. 3 Sol Stein master editor 4

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14 Dixit 27 Dixit 28 The game includes 84 colored cards, each with a story to tell. Wonderful game to practice vocabulary, sentence pattern and writing skills!

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18 Everyone revealed her happy faces, excluding me. At this moment, I was standing under the blazing sun, beside the playground. Providing our teacher didn t demand everyone should cheer for our classmates, I wouldn t stay here for more than one second to watch this meaningless game. I signed and started to observe the clouds in the blue sky. All of a sudden, the screaming sounds made me pay attention to the race again. Time flew. It s the last round of the relay race, I was uninterested in the game because I didn t anticipate Kelly would win the game. Kelly, the girl who took the place of me, was trying her best to participate in the race. Nevertheless, I still despised her ability. 35 If I were in the race, we definitely could win, I murmured to myself. It was me, who should run in the race if I didn t injure my legs during practice one week ago. I tried my best to guarantee that I would recover before the race. However, my teacher insisted that I find someone to replace my position and neglected my thoughts. What drove me crazy was the one replacing my position was my enemy in the class, and I always had severe arguments with her. What s worse, I didn t think she was better than me. 36

19 The unbelievable miracle happened. The distance between our class and the competitor progressively reduced. At that moment, our classmates cheered much more loudly. In comparison with their excitement, I was annoyed by their sounds, so I looked around with rage. At that glance, I saw all of our classmates spare no effort to cheer for our class. Though they kept sweating under the sun, though they were not participants, they just cheered for the participants over and over again. I realized that everyone was expecting the same thing, and I couldn t be that selfish. I am also one of the members of our class I finally understood this. I changed my attitude and joined my classmates. 37 My heartbeat kept accelerating and I was so nervous and eager to know the result. In spite of the fact that I wasn t in the game, I still could feel the same as if I was running. Consequently, Kelly seemed to feel the power from us and won the race. Hooray. I couldn t help screaming and hugging my classmates. I was overjoyed and shed tears because of the unexpected result. Although I didn t participate in the race, it didn t matter to me. I understood that we are a team and everyone is indispensable. 38

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Writing Station Topics 1. Plot Jack and Jill went up the hill To fetch a pail of water. Jack fell down and broke is crown, And Jill came tumbling after. There is too much left out of this story.

21 Writing Station Topics 1. Plot Jack and Jill went up the hill To fetch a pail of water. Jack fell down and broke is crown, And Jill came tumbling after. There is too much left out of this story. Rewrite the story, filling in details to tell us what really happened. 2. Character Mac is a person who loves himself. He loves himself very, very, very much. Show how much Mac thinks of himself by describing some of his actions, in one paragraph. Describe only his actions, not his thoughts. 41 Writing Station Topics 3. Point of View I request some money. Rewrite this sentence as each of the people listed below might word it. For each person, set the scene with one sentence, then tell what the person said. A teenager to a parent A bank robber to a teller A woman to her ex-husband A policeman to a driver A dissatisfied customer to a store owner 4. Tone Write a letter to an animal, creating a very clear mood with the tone of your letter. Think about why you are writing to this animal to save it from being a fur coat, to threaten a lawsuit if he doesn t stop his constant barking at midnight? Are you going to be serious? Silly? Funny? Or? 42

22 Writing Station Topics 5. Show instead of Tell Read the following paragraph, then rewrite the middle part to make your character more interesting to the reader. When you go shopping at Food World, get in line #13 and notice the cashier as she checks your groceries. She stands in one spot, slides each item across the price scanner and drops it into a bag. This is her routine, and she repeats it a hundred times a day. 6. Setting In writing, show that a room has very, very bad smell but without saying it has a very, very bad smell. 43 Station 1 Jack and Jill live in a wooden house in the forest. In a rainy day, they found out they have to get some water from water well. They just carried their bucket and went on the hill. When they arrived at the hill, it rained cats and dogs then. They start fetching the water carefully, but Jill fell down the hill accidentally. Jack was pretty nervous, and he didn't know how he could save Jill. After a rapid think, he decided to call for helps form their neighbors, so he started running rashly. As a result of big ran, he tumbled on the slippery pavement and remain unconscious till the rain stopped. In the next day morning, a hiker discovered Jack and Jill and saved them, they finally be rescued. 44

23 Station 2 Every day when Mac wakes up, he is always surprised by how handsome he was. After brushing his teeth, he will use millions of products on his skin and hair. As a recognition of those products, he will take tons of selfies with the products he uses daily and post it on Instagram with the hashtag #iwokeuplikethis. But the weird part is that Mac never goes outside. Due to the polluted air and fatal sunshine that will destory his perfection. You may think that he will bored himself to death but Mac never gets tired of kissing his reflection in the mirror. At last, he died alone and his corpse rotted next to the mirror

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32 Today s impatient students give a class fewer than 7 minutes. 63 Q & A Suggestions & Encouragement 64

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